concept 39 #1-3

1) I am most afraid of spiders, if there was a spider about to bite or ATTACK my mom, I would not want to lose my mom for the world, I would save my mom and have to face my self getting bit or KILLING the spider!

2) A fear I haven't overcame is asking a specific person to prom.

3)

Concept 38 # 1 and 3

1) At home me and my brother always argue, because he is so different from me and I am from him. He's more into video games and his girlfriend. Im more into my family, and my school. and helping out my mom with everything cleaning, etc ... my brother and I always argue about him never helping around the house, him always playing his video games and always being with his girlfriend and him not focusing on more important things in life.

3)
Hero
- always helping
-polite
-respectful

Villain
-snobby
-dirty
-rude

What will most conflict is the hero always helping out others, the villain can be disrespectful and treat someone badly after the hero just helped them out with something important.

Concept 37 # 1 and 3

1) The Phantom of the Opera!
The main character was in love with the Phantom and her childhood love. The phantom taught her how to sing beautifully and she had spent most of her time with him, then her childhood love returns out of no where! and she ends up choosing him over the phantom


3) The best trick I ever pulled on someone was when I asked my date to Sadies. The principal 2 police officers and another principal pulled him out of class and asked him to bring his stuff. A friend of his gave him a "stolen" phone so he can get more nervous. The officers and principals surrounded him, and when he was coming to the "principals" office I was right there in the front with a big Sadies? sign above me and cupcakes saying Yes or No, it was the scare of his life ..

Quickwrite

Alice in Wonderland

Alice has been to "wonderland" a countless number of times, and each of the characters know all the different scenes or parts of her story. But she doesn't remember. There are certain scenes at the end of the story that flashback to her previous visits to wonderland ..

Concept 34 # 2

If I could possess a superhero's power it would be flying .

If a villain had the power of flying a hero could have s shooting trapping field to capture the villain in the air or on the ground.

Eternal Sunshine

If the movie was in chronological order I probably wouldn't have enjoyed it that much. It made it more interesting working backwards, it was sort of a twist. The structure of the movie I feel was better compared to other movies we have seen. Its more complicated and confusing which makes the movie interesting.

Concept 33 #1

1) I can't really think of anything off the top of my head. But usually I try to be the one who does the nice thing for ex. open doors if someone is carrying a lot of stuff and needs help. Direct somebody if their lost and I know where its at. But when I see somebody do something nice for someone it makes me notice the things people need help with and motivates me to give out a helping hand for something.

Concept 32 #3

If I were to do a 30 second commercial on someones prized possessions being damaged or lost , and how I could protect it. I would start out with the happy family in their well furnished beautiful home. I would then have them be returning from a happy night out to their damaged home. Which was caused by a flood. The home is totally ruined. Next scene would be them being taken care of, and their home being refurnished and built or moved to a new home exactly the way they want it.

Concept 31 # 1,2,3

1)

Twilight: If Bella had not moved to Forks with her dad, she would have never met Edward Cullen and fallen in love, got married, and eventually have gotten married and had a kid. and become a VAMPIRE!

The incident happened gradually ... 

2) If I were to be apart of the incident that happened in the cafeteria I would have definitely helped the kid in the wheelchair, and felt happy that I helped him, Hopefully he would be very thankful about it. And start to stand up for himself and never let that happen again.  I think the bad bunch that did that to the kid wouldn't really be affected maybe some will realize it was wrong.

3) I dont know what incident I want to write about yet.

Concept 30. #1,2,3

1) A and B line objectives for Kelly is she wants to be apart of the "in" crowd by showing off her new swimming pool. Her B conflict is that her geeky cousin is spending the summer at her house. and if she has friends over and they see him it's going to make her "uncool".

2) a) I would make the story a win/win situation if she explains to her friends that he's just their for the summer and they under stand and still make her apart of the cool crowd. b) Is if the cool kids think she's a dork or nerd for having her nerdy cousin stay at her house and she isn't apart of the cool crowd, and she hurts her cousins feelings by making him feel bad because he made her not be cool. c) A win for one side would be if the nerd had a blast staying at his cousins house and using the new pool, and making his cousin not be cool , by making her look bad.

3.) "A" objective.  I haven't thought about it yet.

Concept 29 #3

Intercut telemarketer
Hello! This is Chris's Lingerie Line! Calling about our new shipment of women's seducing lingerie !

Intercut Lain
Lain: HI

Intercut telemarketer
I noticed that you are a big spender on women's and men's lingerie!

Lain: How the &%* do you know!

Intercut telemarketer
We are partners with Victoria's Secret.

Lain: OH , thas wassup!

Intercut telemarketer
So how would you like to one of our first users of our NEW CLOTHING LINE! :D

Lain: kay, I will definitely like to buy some men lingerie as my first purchase!


2 weeks later


Lain: (complaining about clothing)

Intercut telemarketer
Hello this is Chris's Lingerie Line! How can I be of service today!

Lain: I have a complaint about your new lingerie line!
I purchased Male Underwear for my boyfriend out of your Lingerie line. and he got a rash on his butt , I want a full refund!

Intercut Telemarketer
Sorry definitely! Would you like to buy some more lingerie ?! :D

Concept 28 #3

Last year on my birthday I went to House of Pizza.
I started out my morning by going to Sunday Church then going home to sleep.
I hung out with my sister and was trying to figure out what I could do throughout the day.
I was thinking about going to Twin Peaks in San Fransisco but I ended up going to eat at House of Pizza with my family and just went home and watched Karate Kid, the recent one.

Concept #27 #12,3

1)Thatcher should ask Linda the question over lunch at her favorite cafe. Because it is sort of private, and her favorite place so she would be in a better mood than at a place she doesn't like ... He would have short and sweet conversation and lead up to asking her. She doesn't know what to do , and it confused whether she should let him copy or let him fail. She eventually says she'll do it but has a bad feeling

2)Schreiber's Class.
Skit: A student in class throw's a piece of gum at another student, only one person saw. It was the foreign exchange student he didn't know what to do. If he should tell and be called a snitch, or do the right thing and tell the person with the gum in their hair. He was very confused because he wants to be accepted. He then goes to the student that has the gum in their hair and tell them. The person who threw the gum went up to the exchange student and started bullying him...

3)I don't know what I want my story to be about , but if it was about a negative person I would place the setting in a dark place or negative. If the story was based on a happy camper! I would place the story in a happy environment...

Groundhog Day Non-Linear

It's non-linear because the day just never ends,it continues over and over for a long period of time.
Groundhog day was the only movie that repeated day by day.

Pilot Script #4

The Pilot had a good twist, and was VERY INTERESTING.
It seemed like a real story, I can really see this happening in High School.

Jessica Pilot Episode

The pilot was really interesting, it was just a little too long. Slightly a drag ...
but the ending was really good it leaves you curious

Reflection on Psycho

I thought Psycho was a GREAT movie.
even though it is not a newer movie , and the horror movie now are a little more gory.
This movie was really entertaining and frightened me a little.

Pilot Critique

I would add a little more detail , and more descriptive scenes.
Format: 2
Conflict:2.5

Top 10 horror movies!

1.Dead End
2.Jeeprs Creepers
3.Saw
4.The Rite
5.Paranormal Activity
6. The Ring
5.Halloween
6.Friday the 13th
7.TEXAS CHAINSAW MASSACRE
8.The grudge
9. The Strangers
10.Excorism movies.
What makes a horror story?
Based on true stories.
Setting: at night.
Suspense!

Techniques
Suspense!!

Lost Pilot Questions

Characters are revealed by their actions.

Jack talks semi formal , Hurley is sort of californian.

Concept 24 # 2

High School sweetheart meets his new fiance.

Concept 23 #3

I would want to write a high school drama story that relates to real life stories of high school students. The main characters would go through a drama triangle type thing. My story would have different issues that will eventually all be solved or dealt with by the end.

Desperate Housewives

Mary Alice
Gabriela
Carlos

Mary alice is dead , gabriela is hot and shes arguing with Carlos.
The writing is like a book

Concept 22 # 3

I think I would want to do a character driven story because it focuses more on what is going on with the main character. and it can relate more the person watching the movie

My So called Life

High school stress , boys and girls.
I would use those ideas to my script, because thats typically what all boys and girls go through. Especially in High School.

Concept 20 #1

My main character is struggling to find a date to a prom.

Concept 20 #2

I would use Joe as my only character.
I would have Joe discussing with his friend at the mall about him wanting to take Bonnie to the dance. The backdrop would be Alex stepping up to Bonnie asking her to the dance

Concept 15 #1

Babe: (theme)
anybody has the power to succeed , even a pig
Robots:(theme) nobody deserves to be put down, even when theres something better

Dont agree Citizen Kane was the best movie ever.

I dont fully agree Citizen Kane was the best movie ever, I like all the sounds and shots of the whole movie a lot.

Non Linear structure Citizen Kane

Non-Linear structure made the film a little more unique.
The advantages of non linear structure showed different perspectives of the movie.

Everything I know about Charles Foster Kane

had 2 wives , first wife died in accident with 2 year old son.
Married again to opera singer

Freaks and Geeks Reflection

My favorite episode so far is the dance episode. Because it showed Sam being brave and dancing with Cindy. and It was the show where Lindsay met Daniel and Kim.

ComiCon

WRITER'S ASSISTANT
XFILES
SPEC SCRIPT

examples

EXT. THE OUTSKIRTS OF LONDON - TEN YEARS LATER

EXT. THE GARDEN - GAZEBO - DAY

14 INT. THE ROUND HALL - CONT.

15 ON ALICE - THEIR POV 15

40 EXT. THE EDGE OF TULGEY WOOD - SUNSET

Freaks and Geeks questions!

1) She's really nice.
and means well ...

2) Sam going trick-or-treating and getting egged by lindsay his own sister.
Lindsay leaving her mom to go out with friends.

3) Lindsey ditches her mom to go out w. friends.
Sam goes trick or treating.
Lindsey is having too much fun with her friends and eggs kids one ends up being Sam!
Sam goes home so does Lindsay feeling bad ..
Lindsay's mom's feelings are hurt.
Lindsay ends up helping pass out candy.

Concept 10 #'s 1 2 & 3

1) I know cheer pretty well. I would be able to make a short film about a tutorial on cheer stunts or a cheer movie. because when I see movies like that , it stands out when something is wrong or not performed correctly.

2) a. at home the internet is available or movies (ex. documentaries)

3) A subject I know absolutely nothing about is history. I would research the subject thoroughly

concept 9 #1

Lead Character: Rose from "Titanic"
Main Conflict: Intruder into new world
Setting: Hogwarts

Rose started her first day of Wizard school at Hogwarts. She was created to become a wizard for mortals to see what really goes on at Hogwarts. Rose seemed to be very good at wizardry because she studied it a lot to blend in. Mortals were finding out all the spells and secrets of Hogwarts that mortal's have been left out of for years! The mortals couldn't do much about it because they didn't have the power to do these spells. But they were figuring out a way to stop these spells and banish Hogwarts forever in fear of wizards taking over the world.

Concept 8 questions 1&3

1) Set before a football game , Reese Witherspoon would be the nerdy school girl. And Orlando Bloom would be the serious to him self type of guy. They both secretly love each other. And at the football game Orlando's group of friends make fun of Reese , Orlando thinks twice but stands up for her. And they eventually become a couple.

2)Rockstar at a bus stop with a notebook of his most famous songs, he leaves the notebook and the bus stop it gets into the wrong hands and career almost goes down the drain.

Freaks and Geeks, remake!

Jean (lindsay’s mom)

You know I ran into Mrs.Patton at Farmer Jack today. She said she saw you smoking.

Lindsay

I’m not even going to lie to you! I do smoke that Purp, i’m sorry but ever since you started paying more attention to Sam I turned to marijuana!

JEan

Lindsay how dare you! I disown you! 

Sam

Mom , I tried it too. 

Jean

Oh sweetie, its okay! Are you stressed ? Im sorry ill be there more for you!

Lindsay

Fuck .....

High School TV shows!

Switched at Birth-has a lot of suspense!

Feel a bit related to it because the characters are around my age.

Pretty Little Liars- so much suspense! Characters are around my age. always has something to look forward to every show!

Funny , has high school issues. 

Concept 7- #2

If my short story is about 15 minutes long , about 5 percent of it will be real time.

concept 7 - #1

(1) Vantage Point
different point of views , goes back in time looks at other peoples point of views.
(2)MI3
showed different times of night and day.
(3)Water for Elephants
different events happened, things got better for the main character.
On a work trip , last for a couple of months.
(4)The Notebook
Young teens in the beginning of the movie , they start aging. Moves away from parents.

Short Script Reflection

The Best scene was the end because it has a twist !
The worst part of my script was it wasn't very visual not detailed.
I could improved my script by adding more detail.