Concept 31 # 1,2,3

1)

Twilight: If Bella had not moved to Forks with her dad, she would have never met Edward Cullen and fallen in love, got married, and eventually have gotten married and had a kid. and become a VAMPIRE!

The incident happened gradually ... 

2) If I were to be apart of the incident that happened in the cafeteria I would have definitely helped the kid in the wheelchair, and felt happy that I helped him, Hopefully he would be very thankful about it. And start to stand up for himself and never let that happen again.  I think the bad bunch that did that to the kid wouldn't really be affected maybe some will realize it was wrong.

3) I dont know what incident I want to write about yet.

Concept 30. #1,2,3

1) A and B line objectives for Kelly is she wants to be apart of the "in" crowd by showing off her new swimming pool. Her B conflict is that her geeky cousin is spending the summer at her house. and if she has friends over and they see him it's going to make her "uncool".

2) a) I would make the story a win/win situation if she explains to her friends that he's just their for the summer and they under stand and still make her apart of the cool crowd. b) Is if the cool kids think she's a dork or nerd for having her nerdy cousin stay at her house and she isn't apart of the cool crowd, and she hurts her cousins feelings by making him feel bad because he made her not be cool. c) A win for one side would be if the nerd had a blast staying at his cousins house and using the new pool, and making his cousin not be cool , by making her look bad.

3.) "A" objective.  I haven't thought about it yet.

Concept 29 #3

Intercut telemarketer
Hello! This is Chris's Lingerie Line! Calling about our new shipment of women's seducing lingerie !

Intercut Lain
Lain: HI

Intercut telemarketer
I noticed that you are a big spender on women's and men's lingerie!

Lain: How the &%* do you know!

Intercut telemarketer
We are partners with Victoria's Secret.

Lain: OH , thas wassup!

Intercut telemarketer
So how would you like to one of our first users of our NEW CLOTHING LINE! :D

Lain: kay, I will definitely like to buy some men lingerie as my first purchase!


2 weeks later


Lain: (complaining about clothing)

Intercut telemarketer
Hello this is Chris's Lingerie Line! How can I be of service today!

Lain: I have a complaint about your new lingerie line!
I purchased Male Underwear for my boyfriend out of your Lingerie line. and he got a rash on his butt , I want a full refund!

Intercut Telemarketer
Sorry definitely! Would you like to buy some more lingerie ?! :D

Concept 28 #3

Last year on my birthday I went to House of Pizza.
I started out my morning by going to Sunday Church then going home to sleep.
I hung out with my sister and was trying to figure out what I could do throughout the day.
I was thinking about going to Twin Peaks in San Fransisco but I ended up going to eat at House of Pizza with my family and just went home and watched Karate Kid, the recent one.

Concept #27 #12,3

1)Thatcher should ask Linda the question over lunch at her favorite cafe. Because it is sort of private, and her favorite place so she would be in a better mood than at a place she doesn't like ... He would have short and sweet conversation and lead up to asking her. She doesn't know what to do , and it confused whether she should let him copy or let him fail. She eventually says she'll do it but has a bad feeling

2)Schreiber's Class.
Skit: A student in class throw's a piece of gum at another student, only one person saw. It was the foreign exchange student he didn't know what to do. If he should tell and be called a snitch, or do the right thing and tell the person with the gum in their hair. He was very confused because he wants to be accepted. He then goes to the student that has the gum in their hair and tell them. The person who threw the gum went up to the exchange student and started bullying him...

3)I don't know what I want my story to be about , but if it was about a negative person I would place the setting in a dark place or negative. If the story was based on a happy camper! I would place the story in a happy environment...

Groundhog Day Non-Linear

It's non-linear because the day just never ends,it continues over and over for a long period of time.
Groundhog day was the only movie that repeated day by day.

Pilot Script #4

The Pilot had a good twist, and was VERY INTERESTING.
It seemed like a real story, I can really see this happening in High School.

Jessica Pilot Episode

The pilot was really interesting, it was just a little too long. Slightly a drag ...
but the ending was really good it leaves you curious

Reflection on Psycho

I thought Psycho was a GREAT movie.
even though it is not a newer movie , and the horror movie now are a little more gory.
This movie was really entertaining and frightened me a little.

Pilot Critique

I would add a little more detail , and more descriptive scenes.
Format: 2
Conflict:2.5